Fiction Relay – Part 31

I’ve jumped on the Fiction Relay wagon. It’s a very interesting story that’s been running for a few months. Check out the summary and the players on the homepage to catch up.

Now, Hasty set me up so I’m going to take a hit here.

This would be quick. Her mother needed her, but she could do this. The need superseded all common sense and she had to feel him against her. Inside of her.

She opened her legs, turned so she faced him, and aligned her body with his. Removing her leather riding gloves, she buried her fingers in the hair at his nape. The skin to skin opened a connection between them. Blue knew he could see and feel everything shimmering through her being, she also knew he was using his power to heighten her arousal that much more. His heat marched across her skin like electric fingers, awakening sharp arousal that puckered her nipples.

A pulse started in her clit. It matched the beat of her heart, spreading to encompass her entire pussy until she couldn’t think. Her entire being focused on the ache between her thighs. She writhed against him, her mouth seeking his to express her urgency. He remained still, letting her control the pace of the kiss as she undulated in his lap.

“Spencer.” She was out of control because of him and he hadn’t even moved a muscle. “Please.”

“Eager, Samantha?” His hands circled her waist, pressing her down so the bulge of his cock pumped up into the vee of her thighs.

The way he said her name, that husky whisper that coupled with the rocking of his hips to bring her so close she was ready to bust. She couldn’t think, couldn’t form a single coherent word to express how much she needed him. Her mind took up an obscene chant demanding he take her.

“I know,” he whispered as he held her still and teased her with this parody of sex. “I know exactly what you need, love. That’s why I’m here.”

Blue locked eyes with him seconds before she felt him press into her mind. It was like the erotic drag of his cock breaching her, burrowing deep, stretching her mind so wide she cried out. She felt how much he wanted her on that deep, soul binding manner. He whispered across her mind and she exploded in a wave of contractions, her cunt gripping at air as she clung blindly to him.

“Samantha.” The awe in his voice made her shudder harder. “God, you’re beautiful when you come. I want to bury myself inside you and feel the way you milk my cock.”

The wave of her orgasm still rippled through her, but his words revived her lust. Grasping his head, she pulled until he looked at her. “Then do it.”

Faster than she thought possible, Spencer stripped her from the waist down. With a flip of his wrist, he pulled the engorged length of him from his pants and sheathed himself in the greedy clasp of her pussy. He held her hips and pumped up into her as he held her eyes.

The intimate connection of their bodies linked them fully. They exchanged thoughts, secrets, and understanding as he controlled the pace of their lovemaking. Blue let it happen, because in these moments when they linked she was truly his. Self-confidence, anger, pain at the past all fell away as he held her eyes and gave clarity to her usually frenzied thoughts.

He pulled her into a consuming kiss without losing the rhythm. “Open up, baby. Open up so you can receive.”

Her mind was too fuzzy to comprehend what he meant, but her mind and body both relaxed that much more under the lull of his voice. It whispered things across her mind, pushing until she came again with a shriek. Spencer’s cry was nearly inaudible in her hazy, but his essence filling her warmed every part of her. The moment he crested, the vision hit her hard, holding her suspended at the height of passion.

The vision had Meagan, her mother, locked in a terrible battle with blood all around. A sightless, rotting Raj grappling with her mother seized what little breath remained in Blue’s lungs. Sam lay limp in a corner and a strange fear wrapped around her heart at the sight.

“You have to help her, Samantha,” he whispered into her mouth. “Be there in that moment or you risk losing her.”

“What can I do?”

A secret smile tipped his lips as he smoothed a hand over the curve of her naked bottom. “You’ll know when you get there. I’ve given you a piece of me and it’ll help you.”

She knew he wouldn’t tell her anymore so she didn’t push. Instead she climbed off his lap and fixed her clothing. Her body felt sated, the release infusing her with a strange energy. The odd sensation of power thrilled and frightened her.

“Spencer…”

He silenced her with a gentle kiss. “It’s to keep you safe. You’ll know what to do, my little warrior.”

Okay Delilah, your turn. I’m a little edgy now and need to go find relief.

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  2. The Reclining Gentleman

    ooooooo this is good. It’s hot, and i really love the way the power transfer from Spencer reflects the sex. And have we had a glimpse o the future, do we now know that Blue will be the heroine when Raj (driven by Melissa of course) comes calling? Great stuff Cara

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      Cara Thereon

      I got the sex scene in!! I was tempted to not further the story at all, but I’d be a bad writer if I didn’t contribute in the right way. Hopefully Ted will be happy enough with that.

  3. Dawn Rinken

    Okay, not to be a party pooper, but as TRG pointed out, this was an “adult” scene, and I’m really struggling with the fact that Blue is only 15 years old. Maybe it’s because I have a 14 year-old daughter, but Blue’s age turned this scene from hot-sex into horrific-felony for me. (We haven’t established Spencer’s age, but somehow I feel like he’s an adult.) Sorry, Cara. You know I love you and your writing sooooo much! Just wish this had been between Suzy and Sam, or something. :-/

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      Cara Thereon

      I think I missed the fact the Blue is only 15. Where was that communicated at? And I just followed the bread crumbs that Hasty left. My preference was a scene between Suzi and Sam, but that’s not how it was set up. Sorry you don’t like it. Maybe I’ll get a better set up the next time.

      1. Dawn Rinken

        No, it’s not that I don’t like it. The writing is spot-on (as usual with you — you have a genuine gift in this category!) It just made me really, really uncomfortable. When KC first introduced the character of Blue, we talked about how she was a teenager, with her hair, attitude, etc. In my post that followed hers, KC and I had a back-and-forth in the comments section, and I’d figured Blue was 16, since she could drive a motorcycle, but I knew Suzy and Sam weren’t that old. KC replied that she thought Blue was only 15, but was a rebel, which is why she drove, sans license. Later, when I wrote the part of the story where Suzy remembers being pregnant, etc, she talks about how she got pregnant 16 years ago (which would make Blue 15), and then raised her little girl as a single mom for 8 years, until Raj found her in Miami, and she had to hide Samantha and give her up, and then wipe her own memory. Then, recently, at the end of Hasty’s latest section, I commented on the controversy she’d set up, with the sexual tension between a teenager and an adult. (Hasty replied that Blue might be a little old for her age.)

        This story is so long and convoluted, though. Sometimes it’s hard to keep track of all the details we throw at each other. And maybe I’m just having a bad day or something, and I should lighten up. After all, if Raj and Melissa can come back from the dead, why can’t Blue be older than her age? Sorry if I got too pissy.

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          Cara Thereon

          No, it’s fine. I’ve read all the parts, but for some reason missed the exchange. I wrote her as an adult (with Spencer being the same age- young adult) under the assumption that she was one, but it was probably a misread on my part. Your discomfort is understandable in light of the understanding of her age. Maybe that’s a detail that can be revised if we decide to edit and publish. Or my part can be edited down/out to stay in line with the story. Blue read much more mature to me in previous sections.

          1. Dawn Rinken

            Maybe we could just revise the scenes about Blue’s age and establish her as a young adult? It would be a shame to edit/remove this juicy, well-written part, since we finally got a sex scene! (We’re such teases.)

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  4. hastywords

    I missed the fact she was 15 too. I mean she isn’t in school she rides a motorcycle around willy nilly and she talks with the confidence of a 20 something so…. I also missed the exchange. Sorry I fell off the story wagon with that one. Spencer is the same age in my mind… Sorry all. I loved this scene though…awesome writing.

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      1. hastywords

        If I were writing the story it would bother me, it would make me uncomfortable, but I have also found it is precisely the horrors that make a story connectable. So many bad things happen and if Blue is 15 then she is amazing…she has her stuff together. I am sorry though for this…she made a comment to me but I guess I didn’t understand teenager as 15 Ugh… I understand though Dawn feeling so uncomfortable, I have a 9 year old and found I can’t watch SVU or other kid related crime shows.

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  5. tedstrutz

    FINALLY!! I see you are as naughty as ever, C, but I meant Suzi, not her daughter. I figured you and Hasty didn’t remember, or missed her age… don’t worry, I’ve taken care of Spencer, but I’m sure he will be back. Good one, btw.

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      1. MaríMar

        Wow, I am honored you think my writing is that good. I wish I could but I hardly have time to update my own blog. 🙁
        I need more time. Know where I could buy some? 🙂
        xoxox

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