This is a reading from Whisker Burn. It’s about 5 minutes long and my practice at reading my stories aloud. I’m not asking for critique. I know I talk too fast (my students told me that all the time) and certain words tripped me up (subset/subsisted), but I wanted to post what I had. You get the good with the bad here because I’m nothing if not honest.
Everything is helpful toward making me better as I’m working toward checking certain goals off my list.
I’m reading from here and am thinking about attempting this story in the near future or another I haven’t posted yet.
Did you make it to the end? I had to listen to myself a lot and cringed every time i said dick. Here’s a kiss for getting here. Mwah!
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I won’t critique, but thank you for the listen. And the kiss. π
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I can critique myself quite easily. Thanks for listening and for taking my kiss.
You bet π
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<3
Great job; good read; good listen. π
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Thanks!!! π
Wonderful! And I got a kiss at the end! π
Is it wrong that I want to hear you say the word cock over and over again?
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It’s a fun word to say. I like it better than dick honestly.
It’s a beautiful word made all the more beautiful when a sexy gal like you says it.
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Sweet talker. π
It’s pretty much the only weapon I have – words.
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You use them well.
From you that means a lot!