A few haikus (10-14 syllables)
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I question,
I’m dependent,
And never quite sure
*
A flash of a breast
The glint of metal.
Pierced
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River running deeper
Than men plumb.
Undiscovered
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I feel motionless.
Stuck in neutral
Now moving backwards
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Dangerous desire!
Would you let me
Sate my need on you?
Comments
I like the brevity of Haiku (in fact the whole of last year i only updated my FB status in haiku) and I enjoyed this selection Cara. I can relate directly to number 1 and 4. And my answer to the question in number 5? Well I’m a gentleman, I couldn’t say in public 😉
Author
Ahaha. If you can’t say it in public, feel free to email me. 😉
🙂
Provocative. It arroused many images, good job. It makes me want to meet the (me) in this poem. 😉
Author
(Me) is a little interesting. Lots of hidden things few see.
Sitting here, I can imagine so much, it fills volumes, such a sad instrument as myself cannot keep pace, truly a tragedy, these thoughts could cure the world… (Talk about hubris…) 😉
Keep it up sweet soul.
Author
<3
Oh!
I must admit the idea of sating need, for both of us, has me heading to do what I can for myself.
I’m SURE it doesn’t compare!
Author
Enjoy yourself. 🙂
Lmao!
Seems like myself is all I can enjoy anymore. Though the idea of enjoying you is quite compelling.
Either way, thank you for sharing.
Author
I currently have no one to enjoy myself with so at least one of us should have some kind of fun.
Ah.
That is such a shame and a waste!
Author
It is, but I’m hoping to change that soon. A little more patience on my part should see fruit.
Ah …
To but BE that fruit!