I usually don’t post more than once a day so forgive me this second one. Just writing what’s on my mind.
Scathing
Lashing, rendering helpless
Her words burn
Mowing down strong men
Beheading with deadly accuracy
Practiced cruelty?
Staving off advances, discussion
Utilizing an intelligent mind
To dissect with ease
Cut to the quick
To the meat of your argument
The heart of your worth
Down to the bones you thought hidden by skin
Some would label her a harpy
Virago, full of strength and spirit
A force, a wall, a silver sword
To be respected, and perhaps feared
To be engaged with all faculties alert
She is not to be underestimated
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From old movies, I was scared of her. By what you wrote, I love her. xo, Jayne
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I didn’t want her to be perceived as bad here. I wanted her to seem very much intelligent, capable, and fierce. As most women should be seen.
You transformed her to exactly that. You know, why isn’t SHE a Marvel Comic Superhero?! She could be in a hot second!
Sounds like someone that’s reading over my shoulder right now…
Very nice write …
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