(Me) Understood

A few haikus (10-14 syllables)

I question,
I’m dependent,
And never quite sure

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A flash of a breast
The glint of metal.
Pierced

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River running deeper
Than men plumb.
Undiscovered

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I feel motionless.
Stuck in neutral
Now moving backwards

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Dangerous desire!
Would you let me
Sate my need on you?

Comments

  1. The Reclining Gentleman

    I like the brevity of Haiku (in fact the whole of last year i only updated my FB status in haiku) and I enjoyed this selection Cara. I can relate directly to number 1 and 4. And my answer to the question in number 5? Well I’m a gentleman, I couldn’t say in public ๐Ÿ˜‰

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      1. rlherb

        Sitting here, I can imagine so much, it fills volumes, such a sad instrument as myself cannot keep pace, truly a tragedy, these thoughts could cure the world… (Talk about hubris…) ๐Ÿ˜‰

        Keep it up sweet soul.

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      1. dgwolf

        Lmao!
        Seems like myself is all I can enjoy anymore. Though the idea of enjoying you is quite compelling.
        Either way, thank you for sharing.

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